Trying to draw ok

Well, I do have some issues with my style...
It surely hurts, but I have to work hard.

I made some tests to check if I can draw.
Sure, I can.
But the first thing is that: those are more cartoon style and this is not the style I want.
But I can do that at least... It is actually relaxing.

I have to find ways to draw smoother. It takes me 4 times to make some traits.
Plus, I have to practice the shades and lights.
The humans are something I want to improove.

My actual goal: make Sakimichan style art.
Current status: As better in drawing as her when she was in High school...
Ouch...

I have my weakness, but I do have strong points.