RADICAL CHANGE IN NARSTAK STORY

Daniel Alann Ram is now less miserable than before. The main character of Narstak deserve a wife. The old version was told in a context in which her wife was murder, but I realised that this major cliché would hurt the story and its foundation. Because I still can create the basic lore of my entier story, I bring her back. But, I have to make major modifications.

But, I keep a dead relative in the story, as it keeps the roots intact. I decided to change a few things. The son who was murder while still a fetus was kill by the same guy who killed Daniel's wife in the version I want to get rid off.

This will allow me to limit the modifications.
But also, I realised that some parts are really dumb now and I have to make so many things.
Maybe Narstak won't be my first novel, but it will be one.

Narstak is a powerful story. And even though Daniel's wife only play a very secondary role in the story, it is something I want to make clear and it will be a major thing if I had to make the modification while the first was out.

There will be a colored version soon. (Armor and no armor)

Incoming animation

Dead tourmented by the dragon fruit

The tombs are flooded...
The dragon fruit fall from the sky...
The river lift the door of the sleeping ones...
Glowing eyes are stongly disturbed by this awakening...
The fruit is floating, so is the dead awaken...
He grab the fruit and rise...
It is life, in his hand, that he hold for the first time in centuries...
No need to eat it, no need to give it... he is fascinated by the beauty of the dragon fruit...
Is there any other way to say how great the light is making everything so alive?
But, he want to sleep... But now, the river has taken away his eternal home... His garden of drown flowers may never watch over him and his friends again... He may be sad, but he can't cry...
Such an unfortunate faith for someone who's faith was ended long ago...

Incoming animation

For my incoming animation, I will use a technic of poppet animation.

Modelisation: Kloha update

Kloha is in progress, but still a long way. The model looks similar to the drawing, but it looks also a little too fat. It's hard. Still, I need to put the teeth and it will began to look great (and the spikes at the end of the tail)

Old god

Kloha

The Kloha is one of the greatest predator on Phonnannop. His circlish «head» is in fact a upper jaw which evolved into this rost.
As many other animals of his evolutive clad, the Kloha has a toungue mouth to bite and eat. Also, the strength of the rost can break bones and it is very difficult to break. The resistance of the rost is cause by heavy structures, which explain the bery massive and long tail.

The Kloha has 4 arms with thumbs and 4 legs, but only 2 of the legs are use as the other pair is ridiculously small.

The kloha is oftenly challenged by the Merom, who has a common ancestor 21 million years ago.